needs music!

 I liked the idea of my symbolic transient space so i went to a near canal to take snaps of my lantern tied to a bit of string travelling by what i think of as a relaxing environment, near water at a time where the lighting was just turning dark, adding a warming tone in the to-be video! I think this needs much improvement, soft and soothing music to add and i need to find a way to cut the string out to create a more real effect. I am going to now look at different spaces portraying my mood i want to really create.